Weekly Poetry, #2 – Guest Post by Jane Love

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Welcome to an other episode of poetry. This time, instead of another work from me, a piece written and sent to me by Jane Love.

This is the first work out of her poem trilogy. Other two works are also on the schedule: 12th and the 19th of April. Something to put into your calendar perhaps?! 🙂

Images are  provided by the guest poster, and  they are linked to her site Harmonious Joy.

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Unconscious

This was supposed to be a splendid date-

a setup involving a strategically placed bait

that may eventually lead to a life-long mate.

But i am afraid you will have to wait-

I may be a little Late.

..

As i crossed the highway road,

i was freed from my heavy load

because when i exited the shop,

out of my hands – flew the cake.

Down on the ground i did drop

after i was hit by a car with no brake.

..

You will probably think my love confession was fake

and throw our conversation into anger’s lake

for what i hear from Dr. Blake

is that i may never wake.

..

Baby, i am alone on this track.

My body feels as though it was crushed by a bowling rack.

Everywhere i look seems black.

Yet even in this darkness,my love for you will never lack.

..

Dearest, i’m scared.

Should i come back?

Or should i go on being dead?

3 Comments

  1. Reblogged this on Wealth Bankers and commented:

    wow… I love it… how you spindle the story.. pulling us along the rails of occurrences and we never suspecting what will come next

    Like

  2. wow… I love it… how you spindle the story.. pulling us along the rails of occurrences and we never suspecting what will come next

    Liked by 1 person

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